除了以上提到的主体段展开方式,还有一些常用的手段,比如:testimony(引证),可以用专家的观点增强演讲的信度,也可以用普通人的一手经验证明自己的观点。另外,大家还需要了解的是,举例分为简短的例子,具体深入的例子和假想的例子;数据包括单一数据,组合数据等等。
范文一:
man’s life is a process of growing up, actually i’m standing here is a growth. if a person’s life must constituted by various choices, then i grow up along with these choices. once i hope i can study in a college in future, however that’s passed, as you know i come here, now i wonder what the future holds for (= what will happen to) me.
when i come to this school, i told to myself: this my near future, all starts here. following i will learn to become a man, a integrated man, who has a fine body, can take on important task, has independent thought, an open mind, intensive thought, has the ability to judge right and wrong, has a perfect job.
once my teacher said :” you are not sewing, you are stylist; never forget which you should lay out to people is your thought, not craft.” i will put my personality with my interest and ability into my study, during these process i will combine learning with doing. if i can achieve this “future”, i think that i really grow up. and i deeply believe kindred, good-fellowship and love will perfection and happy in the future.
how to say future? maybe it’s a nice wish. lets make up our minds, stick to it and surely well enjoy our life.
中文翻译:人的一生是一个成长的过程,事实上,我现在站在这里也是一次成长。如果一个人的一生必须面临不同的选择,那我长大伴随着这些选择。有一次,我希望我能在将来在大学,然而那是过去了,因为你知道我来这里,现在我不知道将来如何为(=会发生什么)我。
当我来到这所学校,我告诉我自己:我不久的将来都从这里开始。以下我将学习如何成为一个男人,一个正直的人,谁拥有一个健康的体魄,能承担重要的任务,能独立思考,思想开放,心思缜密,有判断是非,有一个完美的工作能力。
我的老师曾经说:“你是不是缝纫,你是设计师;永远不要忘记你所能展示给人们是你